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It wasn’t as if the girl wanted to be in the castle.

When she woke up, she was in the castle, all alone with no one to tell her why she was there or any memory of how she got there.

She cried endlessly while praying before the altar in the chapel, asking God if she had been punished for something she had done that she could not remember. Her tears stained the carpet, and she fell asleep with only her sorrow for comfort.

She wanted to escape from this large prison, and she began searching the hallways, wandering by paintings and cabinets with food inside that she used to sustain herself.

All the doors in the castle were unlocked, save for seven doors at the end of a hallway with golden tapestries. Above all but one door was a stained glass window depicting someone who the girl felt a strong connection to, regardless that she knew not their faces nor their names or personalities.

A faint, soft voice told her to pick one door and only one door, and that would lead her to her future. If she chose to remain in her past, she could choose to stay in the castle.

Eight choices for the girl and she knew not which one to pick. How could she pick when there were so many to pick? The very idea of it startled her, and she only wished she had someone to help her.

She was on her own deciding her own fate.
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Visual novel or dating sim, this would be the introduction by Holly's older brother Henry since Henry is an author and uses his earnings to support himself and his sister.
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=FrznSpade Dec 8, 2012  Student General Artist
Wow x3.
Thats really well written. Which is saying something. Author writing for an author. *AUTHORCEPTION

Honestly it seems that this is kind of true.
Since Holly herself actually will probably pick only one of them or none of them.
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~RikaofAkahana Dec 8, 2012  Student Digital Artist
Henry is the love child of myself and MS word >3> (Lol, jk)

I think for lolz, if certain conditions were met you'd get a bonus harem ending :XD: POLYGAMY AT ITS FINEST!
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=FrznSpade Dec 8, 2012  Student General Artist
xD
That would be neat.
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~RikaofAkahana Dec 8, 2012  Student Digital Artist
Overall feel I'd want for the story itself [link]
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=FrznSpade Dec 8, 2012  Student General Artist
HMMMMM
So mysterious and confusing? xD
Jk
But it will probably be like that in some parts.
*And make it hard to play. Like the paths are hard to pick for some characters.
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~RikaofAkahana Dec 8, 2012  Student Digital Artist
Because gradually you'd grow to love at least two of the characters, so when there comes a point to pick one of them, well, you'll be really torn.
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=FrznSpade Dec 8, 2012  Student General Artist
Mean of me to say this, but I pick the one that looks better most of the time xD
But when that happens...
GAH THE FEELS.
(I normally don't actually have to pick between two of them.. ;-; )
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~RikaofAkahana Dec 8, 2012  Student Digital Artist
If it were made into a TV show, who would I make into the canon love interest? Idea for the hobbies of the guys Holly could pick from (not final)
- Film club
- Soccer
- Violin (I'm thinking making him the grandson of my OCs Claris and William)
- Sketching
- Mechanics
- Cooking
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